Absent Rainbow (Slight Content)
Would you like to see black?Far darker than anything?Where eagles and sparrow'srefuse to flyinto an inferno of painthat breaks like ice from a glacieras it cuts that forever scarinto the flesh of the...
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*looks somewhat stunned ... and a bit speechless*perhapsI have danced in someone else's darknessmore timesthan I care to admitit leaves scars ...brilliantly effective writing here, erik ... sheesh ......
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JMLWell i am so thankful that you read thisand after catching up to your thoughtsdecided to offer them to meyeah it is never fun to dance in someonelses blackbut to dance in your own might be...
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Oh wow Erik.. ya got me speechless..The power in this can really be felt, very strong intense writing, very effective. Your imagery was absolutely wonderful, very vivid. I was clinging to every word....
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Phenomenal writing as always Erik, can relate..can relate--Mike
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this one really caught my attention and took me on a ride.
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MysticGlad to have you hanging on every wordI am glad taht you didn't decide to get off before it was overERik
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MikeThanks for the wordsSorry that you could relate to thisIt isn't a very fun place to beERik
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QuinnGlad to catch your attentionmore happy that I kept itThanks for giving this one a peekERik
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I also was hanging on every word. It was so very different than the broken love affair that I first imagined the poem to be about when I first read the title. It was BLACK, very strong. Well done.
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KazoomGlad you came in and readtho not what you expectedI am thrilled you liked it for what it wasERik
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Care to dance?Mmm. Oh yes I wouldbecause the absence ofrainbowsis my favorite coloryour shade is drawn wellAnd my feet tapped.My dearSometimes you take my breathe away.-P"Where is my rusted knight? I...
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Ah but how do you flywhen I take that breath from you?SighI am so so very happy you likedthough I never thought any one wouldtap their foot to this one heheERik
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THIS IS AN OUTSTANDING and AWESOME PIECE!!!!! Hi Erik, from one who isn't speechless, I just couldn't say enough about this piece. You have captured the very essences of black and colored it seven...
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How black indeed...I read many things into this...but mostly a heart so damaged by the past, that all thoughts of love are gone...and what is left is simply going through the motions...substituting...
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KarenWell nowI have the tough task of thanking you for that....HmmI am truly humbled by your words, thoughts et alI think I rather like being the King of darkness....tis a step up from the Prince I...
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Soulseaseyes there are a few layers in thissome overtsome hidden in the shadows...though to give them all up would be sacrilegeAs to the dance adding color....?I think it more like this....after all...
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